It's quite a feat creating a slightly convoluted short story, and Sam Cheever did it. This required mild bran activity to get through, mostly because the "editing was a bit choppy" (if I may use a movie term). It didn't flow as it was supposed to flow, would maybe be a more suitable explanation. The story (and characters) jumped all over the place, while the two leads also jumped each other.But since that's the main reason these NN quickies are created, jumping each other wasn't a problem. The jumping all over the place, on the other hand, was.Also...What was it with Greek gods using archaic English?